For this story, I’d like to continue to have you thinking like a writer. What are some of the things the author has done well in this story? Make sure to support your thoughts with evidence from the text.
Some things that the author has done well is that he is showing action like when Carl the biker is reading the boys diary and Carl calls him a looser because of what he read in the diary. Carl tells the boy that since the diary is in the room it is his.